FOUR FEATHERS PRESS ONLINE EDITION: SCHOOL SHOES Send up to three poems on the subject of or at least mentioning the words school and/or shoe, totaling up to 150 lines in length, in the body of an email message or attached in a Word file to donkingfishercampbell@gmail.com by 11:59 PM PST on August 16th. No PDF's please. Color artwork is also desired. Please send in JPG form. No late submissions accepted. Poets and artists published in Four Feathers Press Online Edition: School Shoes will be published online and invited to read at the Saturday Afternoon Poetry Zoom meeting on Saturday, August 17th between 3 and 5 pm PST.

Sunday, August 11, 2024

Carl Stilwell AKA CaLokie

A Poem about a Pomegranate Tree in Paradise


I meant to write a poem about an apple tree in Eden. 

But I found out it was probably a pomegranate Adam 

and Eve ate because they didn’t grow apples then.


I wanted to make Eve real sexy…Big boobs, blue eyes, 

long blonde hair flowing to the back of her butt…

Sex stuff gets a lot of laughs at poetry readings.

However, I learned Myth Eve, the one who according to 

Genesis 3:20 was named Eve because she was 

the mother of our species, wasn’t bio-Eve. 


According to scientists—those nasty fellows who revealed 

earth revolved around sun, not vice versa— Mitochondrial Eve, 

also known as mt-Eve, was the woman from whom ALL 

humans descended in an unbroken line through their mothers 

and the mothers of those mothers, back until all lines converge 

on one woman who was born and lived around 200,000 years ago 

in a region around Lake Victoria which is Africa’s largest lake 

and whose waters flow into the Mediterranean Sea 

through our planet’s longest river, the Nile.


When I attended Bob Jones University, I believed evolution was 

a myth and the first three chapters of Genesis history.

It never occurred to me then why a narrative of a talking snake 

with legs, belonged more to a fairy tale than a history book.


Nor did I see it as a contradiction that during the six days 

of creation, both wild and domesticated animals were 

created on the same day, the sixth which coincidentally 

was the same day God created humans in his image.


But as time passed and more fossil evidence was discovered

confirming the theory of evolution while telescopes showed that 

the farthest stars in the universe were billions of light years away, 

not thousands as fundamentalists who believed the world 

was created close to 10,000 years ago, it became harder 

and harder to hold on to the faith of my Bible Belt fathers.


My Systematic Theology teacher at Fuller Theological Seminary was no 

young earth creationist like my science teacher at Bob Jones.

He said the disobedience of Adam and Eve to God’s forbidden 

fruit prohibition was a fall into history.

Just because a story is fiction doesn’t mean it never happened, right?

And Aristotle told us that art is a lie that tells the truth.


Joel Baden, Yale Professor of the Hebrew Bible, said original sin 

does not exist in Genesis.

The whole story of Genesis 2 & 3 is not to focus on the paradise 

which was lost but on the reality we see around us.

Why is it that we have to work the ground to get food?

Why is there pain in childbirth?

Why don’t we live forever?


Dr. Baden also said that according to archeological 

and historical evidence, the Israelites were not slaves in Egypt 

nor was there an Exodus and conquest.

But maybe Exodus fell into history also when after escaping 

slavery, Harriet Tubman (or "Moses", as she was called) made 

some 13 missions to rescue approximately 70 slaves, including 

her family and friends by using the network of antislavery activists 

with safe houses they called the Underground Railroad.


But what do I know?

I am only a Bible Belt born and bred teacher who taught 

an 8th grade U.S. History class in a Los Angeles middle 

school before retiring over 20 years ago and becoming 

a Bible Belt born and bred poet.


One thing I know for damn sure—pomegranate seeds 

in my oatmeal are a hell of a lot juicer than sliced apples.


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